
Well I want to be a professional cook! why because I love cooking. first thing I am going to do to accomplish this is graduate highschool. next I will go to work so I can save M$$$Y! And after that I will go to college! Man i don't know what I want to do in college i just want to get that far why You trying to crush my dreams with all the negative attitude Just kidding thanks for the help. But seriously I don't know what I want to do in college.
Kool, I enjoy reading your blog. However, you have several error that I hope your classmates pickup on. Otherwise, keep dreaming.
ReplyDeleteYou might need some more sentences to make it a little longer. Try to put more information in it so that it seems more personable.
ReplyDeleteyeah being a cook would be cool i guess, college sounds fun lots of fun parties i dont know am having a hard time with highschool idk what id do in college
ReplyDeletehey that sounds great, you got a dream stick with it. maybe add a little to what you want to do in collage tho.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to me a little scatter brained. It doesn't seem to flow very well. Follow your dream and don't settle for less though! The world needs good cooks ;)
ReplyDeletethat is cool being a cook. My lil sis wants to be one also. Thats important to finish HS, and to go to collage. Well i wish you luck on your dream. and also you forgot to capitalize your 'I's
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